【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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$ S. J( k- j3 l& Y* E我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. x2 D0 A2 d0 X- j- {That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 J+ ^: ?" b' u  ^From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
$ z0 S1 Z! A/ I2 c* }We meet and talk everyday,
1 \* w% _. D% h. l. ^& DBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* m. c+ G+ D: t8 l, B  `5 j( yIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 g0 d$ e" B# o/ lI would probably know how you feel
4 w6 d3 I2 @3 c* @Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 h4 P/ J. x! n" TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 v, V" t5 \0 y2 pEntrust my love within your heart
' d7 `4 W0 D6 bLove… just the word love
+ z! }( R  J) F( N' E/ CWhy is it so difficult to express?
  m' N, d, H6 ~% s% z% L0 cI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- |  N& n. M# t5 a2 f+ x' _/ R4 S" vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' V  {; p  \: W% @$ ]3 LI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; u5 z# U* @7 u% i9 p' d$ r: S( yEntrust my love within your heart
1 _$ T5 P( Z; ECan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

6 y% N* Y) @5 F[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

; B" X; m! S( Z6 n1 Z) `) t2 E. M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ R. ]8 D& V9 _+ E( K3 h<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 b& ^' q/ ?+ w0 R<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* e9 g1 ]  M8 H2 o! b& m& o# g<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 k3 R8 v$ h# q4 ]<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! a7 }: X$ u% ]4 T" [) s<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; J0 b- b5 ^' @  k) P1 g<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 |8 |& x1 k6 u6 w<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 W6 N( _2 }% F7 o1 H. }<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
$ r8 o$ T. ?' p. k2 u2 P0 O<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. M  g2 c. X7 b+ @0 S<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: G6 Q0 {1 N2 P* j1 d- }9 Y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% H! s+ A# K1 E. l) b& G( u<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. U$ u% |* j. w7 `5 [<P>我想说我爱你</P>
. c6 @' g! {) ^) }& u<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 r- y3 w1 I  Z% H6 F! [: d<P>但我不会</P>
) V# \2 \$ v& A+ h  T: |' \<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# E8 [8 `! N% y, E1 C<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ c6 x+ V. t, E+ ?6 M- f- I7 P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 F, W  T& n; ?4 Q$ m<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. S+ ]$ w, q$ h  Z" h% t+ r# P8 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" y! L- @0 _4 N9 P/ @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
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<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 P# W/ [2 K4 x# g<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! Q$ C+ [/ A3 m( L4 e. u; S<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; ^  [9 }( l( l3 x<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" `6 d/ D7 G/ r) b- J8 C9 Z<P>But I never did </P>
( @3 F# U( J5 D- u3 t3 R7 l<P>但我不会 </P>
; G" v* V. c# \8 ~1 M; V<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* u6 L- a9 B# a3 q" @( N/ [<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 j8 V. K( V  p- a; F" `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) A8 B& `2 o8 u: E* o, ?<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ l7 j  u* F: d# u* c2 ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' F) H! Y5 M( K 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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( C5 P0 }/ W- j; p( Y9 S7 _这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. ]: @9 q& c( L这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>